A Call to Action

The class was really helpful on Wednesday in giving me some ideas for what I could possibly do for my final assignment. One thing that I had mentioned was the idea that Habitat for Humanity wasn't hurting for volunteers, and while this is true I realized that there is no Habitat for Humanity group on campus. I thought that I could make a brochure that would get tech students interested in Habitat for Humanity, with information on what it's about and how they can be involved. I also thought that I could write a collection of poems that would possibly inspire people to volunteer based off of my experience. Let me know what you think.

Response to Essay Comments

I definitely agree with the fact that I was a bit too repetitive in my essay with some of the paragraphs. The thought that I could delve deeper into what the house really means to each aspect is something that I will look into before the final draft. I will also work on trying to add my own accounts of working with Habitat for Humanity. The hardest part for me was putting into words what it was like. All of your comments were very helpful and I think they'll help me with improving my essay.