Response to Essay Comments

I definitely agree with the fact that I was a bit too repetitive in my essay with some of the paragraphs. The thought that I could delve deeper into what the house really means to each aspect is something that I will look into before the final draft. I will also work on trying to add my own accounts of working with Habitat for Humanity. The hardest part for me was putting into words what it was like. All of your comments were very helpful and I think they'll help me with improving my essay.